The Stalker
Mystery teasers are little stories where you need to figure out what happened based on the given clues.
Dan The Dog was searching for something. He had been searching for hours on end, and he didn't know where else to look. He KNEW it was somewhere around here. This was HIS territory, everybody else knew it. But this, this.... creature of some sort had followed him about, sneaky and surreptitiously avoiding his gaze, until he had saw it and pounced on it. But it was quick. Quicker than Dan liked to admit. It always appeared on sunny days, maybe it couldn't stand the sun, or something. But the thing was black. It should hate the sun, shouldn't it? Hmmmmmmm.... What worried Dan most was that it reminded him of some one, some one he knew. But he couldn't place it.
What was Dan The Dog looking for?
Comments
grilledcheese 
Dec 21, 2007
| hahaha creative! loved it |
safire2191 
Dec 21, 2007
| good teaser but the grammar really irked me. and the relationship between being black and hating the sun doesn't really make sense... |
seventy7
Dec 21, 2007
| cute  |
scoobydoobydoo
Dec 22, 2007
| Cute! Lol, I thought it was a black cat but that wouldve been stupid.  |
dogg6pound9
Dec 22, 2007
| way too easy... and could have used a little more creativity... the concept was good except you practically gave the answer away   |
dudebomb93
Dec 23, 2007
| The name sounds like sometin really mysterious, but it was ez,
good one anyway, |
hipeople
Dec 24, 2007
| i liked it before the sun and the black part i thought it was a bunny |
niteowl1996
Dec 24, 2007
| easy and boring! |
micar_ron
Dec 29, 2007
| Any HaRdeR!! : D |
AltrnativGrlx14
Dec 30, 2007
| that was so EASY!!! c'mon, give me a challenge...  |
rt1819
Jan 04, 2008
| I loved this one! So creative and fun. Thanks for posting! Make more! Congrats!!!!  |
bookwrmKP
Jan 04, 2008
| Thanks. I thought it was pretty cute.... |
MzPink85
Jan 07, 2008
| waay too easy |
scallio
Jan 15, 2008
| It was easy but really cute!
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ikilleddoehead
Jan 16, 2008
| that was pretty easy, but i liked it |
Kayla_Darkheart
Jan 20, 2008
| I liked this, easy as it was. Very interesting....
'Shadows are the eternal followers oF light, mirrors of the soul.'
*I made that up just now*  |
bookwrmKP
Jan 21, 2008
| Thanks. |
xoshortie522
Jan 29, 2008
| that was pretty good but i think too many ppl make easers about shadows |
cecepeach83
Feb 05, 2008
| Nice concept but you could've made it a little harder. Entirely too much given away. |
(user deleted)
Feb 18, 2008
| I can put my foot on my shadow at times. I image a dog could. |
(user deleted)
Feb 18, 2008
| just a variation on a very old chestnut. |
bookwrmKP
Feb 18, 2008
| Thanks for the nice comments! |
mudbogger
Feb 19, 2008
| Very cool you did a good job!!
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luckypuppy
Mar 17, 2008
| mrpatatohead has a point... cute read though  |
bookwrmKP
Mar 17, 2008
| Thank You!!!!! |
Lita_Lightheart
Mar 21, 2008
| aaah that was clever!
I really liked that one, going on to my favorites |
soccercow10
Mar 22, 2008
| Too Easy! I rated it fun though
Kudos. |
amy_baby
Mar 28, 2008
| Way easy, but it was cute. It's good to have some easy ones for the younger kids though! Brownie points for you! |
bookwrmKP
Mar 29, 2008
| Thanks for the nice comments! |
Ryko
Jun 20, 2008
| X3 Cute |
kankuro94
Jul 26, 2008
| i liked it |
eggface
Jul 28, 2008
| Gosh, it was so easy, HIS SHADOW!!
But of course I got it right |
gopu
Aug 28, 2008
| mysterious but ez |
Loris21
Nov 16, 2008
| Very cute |
keeperofdeath 
Nov 19, 2008
| heh, I got that one wrong... |
EdWaRdLuVeR_918
Dec 25, 2008
| well, that one was soooo EASY! i got it almost instantly. but it was still really good, all the same |
kimba132
Feb 06, 2009
| Everyone's saying it was way too easy, but I had to look at the answer
Now I feel really silly.
Great teaser, though! |
precious1026
Mar 04, 2009
| Another Great Caper from the Braingle Gang. This was a very good and funny teaser. keep them coming. 
Good Work. |
Jake10
Nov 16, 2009
| Pretty easy..... |
Marisa_me
Mar 03, 2010
| SUCKED! |
geekymeek
Feb 21, 2011
| the title grabbed my attention. now usually i try to say nice stuff about peoples teasers but there is nothing nice to say about this one. it was WAY TO EASY. do you think i am an IDIOT!!!!! |
geekymeek
Feb 21, 2011
| the title grabbed my attention. now usually i try to say nice stuff about peoples teasers but there is nothing nice to say about this one. it was WAY TO EASY. do you think i am an IDIOT!!!!! |
geekymeek
Feb 21, 2011
| sorry for the repeat of the comment... my com is being stupid |
Candi7
Jun 15, 2012
| Umm what does being black hav to do with hating the sunlight |
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