Guards
Riddles are little poems or phrases that pose a question that needs answering. Riddles frequently rhyme, but this is not a requirement.
We are many guards of a precious gate
Sometimes we lean backward and sometimes we stand straight
Some of us are short and some are tall
We never quit the fight but we might fall
We wear war paint and cover in black
We always defend but never will attack
Comments
beth
Aug 30, 2002
| I have been attacked by an eyelash and let me tell you they can hurt. |
majd 
Aug 31, 2002
| Well, on a second thought, I do agree with you beth  |
ccccc   
Oct 17, 2002
| good 1 |
candyko_2
May 11, 2005
| hikhik..  |
moriarty94   
Mar 03, 2008
| Good one Majd. |
JessicaG   
Mar 03, 2008
| great riddle!!
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puttumup  
Mar 03, 2008
| how is youre eyes a gait????  |
bradon182001   
Mar 03, 2008
| Not sure what I think of this one. It was a nice riddle. I didn't get it, so would have to say it was hard. After reading the answer, everything seems to fit pretty well, so will say good teaser. Thanks for posting.  |
jabdr   
Mar 03, 2008
| I didn't have a clue I was wroking with flowers,plant life, venus flytraps..surprised by the answer good one (be interesting to see if anyone 'gets' it.  |
doehead   
Mar 03, 2008
| I thought stand tall and lean backwards were very deceptive and not fitting for the answer.Sorry,but I think this was poorly written.  |
Aarghonauts  
Mar 03, 2008
| i would not have gotten that in one million years. make that a billion!  |
smartymarty  
Mar 03, 2008
| I liked it. I was thinking teeth till I got to the part about black paint, then I thought eyelashes. Thanks  |
phyllisa   
Mar 03, 2008
| I was way off, I thought of bowling pins (or something similar)!!!!!!  |
SSVillalobos 
Mar 03, 2008
| Nice riddle - well written and tricky! |
Eugeniuss
Mar 03, 2008
| I also thought teeth at first, but then also thought about the gates at a railroad crossing (being brightly colored, sometimes falling). The one clue that didn't fit was being covered in black. |
bestgirl 
Mar 03, 2008
| Cute. |
auntiesis    
Mar 03, 2008
| Stumped me, I never would have gotten it. Pretty good riddle though.  |
Kayla_Darkheart   
Mar 03, 2008
| At first I thought it was teeth.
Good one. |
zaya 
Mar 03, 2008
| Gotta go with puttumup's point. Your eye is not a gate, hence the fact that after Clue #1 none of us would have thought of eye lashes. Poor teaser. |
mondayschild59   
Mar 03, 2008
| I got it right off the bat. It's really self explanatory. I guess it's easier for women to get it right since the black is mascara and the paint is eyeshadow. Great teaser.
Loved it.
Monday~  |
leroy_h 
Mar 03, 2008
| I wouldn't have guessed this in 100 years. Its a great teaser tho. |
Bastet  
Mar 03, 2008
| I don't agree about eyes not being gates. The eyes are a gate between the outer world of visual stimuli and the brain. There's also the saying about eyes being the window to the soul.
I don't know about the "wearing war paint" since it is the eyelids, not the lashes, that wear eye shadow, but the rest is very good. |
pigsrock09
Mar 03, 2008
| Most of it was good, but your eyelids protect your eyes, not your eyelashes. |
WECoyote   
Mar 03, 2008
| I thought nosehairs.
Nice riddle. |
shawneeo   
Mar 03, 2008
| Great teaser! This one was better than most, it was different, and well written. AND, I got it, yay!!!
Gee, some of y'all's criticisms are kinda harsh and petty! It's a riddle, so, something doesn't have to be LITERALLY a GATE in a riddle. It's part poetry! Any riddle uses metaphor, etc. Those that said it was "poorly written", are totally wrong. If you could only literally describe the thing, it wouldn't be a riddle!!!
Also, the "war paint" is totally valid, because people wear other colors on their lashes except black. Also, the lashes DO PROTECT the eyes, that's why they are there!!! The lashes AND eyelids, both protect the eyes.
Don't worry, maid, I think all the petty critics are just bitter because they couldn't solve it! If not, then I guess they're just bitter, because this was an EXCELLENT riddle, better than almost any I've read for a long time.
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shawneeo   
Mar 03, 2008
| Oh, sorry majd, I mistyped your username above.
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UptheHill  
Mar 03, 2008
| Sounds like a dumb blonde chick thought she was so smart, wait a minute I'm blonde, NOT!!! |
avonma   
Mar 03, 2008
| I must agree with Bradon. It was a good one, but I didn't get it. Just a little dense, I guess. But, thanks for posting.  |
bbwild95   
Mar 03, 2008
| to pigsrock09:
Your eyelashes actually do protect your eyes. They help keep out dust and such out of your eyes.
Great teaser! I totally didn't get it but once I read the answer I felt that everything matched up |
majd 
Mar 10, 2008
| Thank you guys for all the comments regardless of being positive or negative |
crazy10man   
Mar 03, 2011
| No way I could get this one.
With that said, hasn't anyone heard the phrase, "The eyes are the gateway to the soul"?
While I understood that part, some of the rest is a tad ambiguous: The eyelids wear the war paint, not the eyelashes.
And yes, you have a certain poetic license as a riddle creator, but you should keep in mind what you're trying to make everyone guess. It's not an easy thing to do. |
papiermeister   
Mar 03, 2011
| Great riddle! I got this one rather quickly, but really fun!  |
lukasiwicz 
Mar 03, 2011
| For those of you who carped about it being the eyelids, not the eyelashes, that wear "war paint," did you forget about mascara? |
juju1946 
Apr 04, 2011
| I thought it was maybe some gnarly looking teeth at first. Eyelashes that grow the wrong way certainly do attack. Good riddle, but it needs a little refining, I think, before I'd call it great. |
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