Beyond Star Crossed
Riddles are little poems or phrases that pose a question that needs answering. Riddles frequently rhyme, but this is not a requirement.
She so peaceful, yet causes fear
Him so bright and full of cheer
She rests the body, he wakes the soul
Him so light, she black as coal
Her with mole and tiny bright freckles
He covers us with tiny tear speckles
She hides us, he beams with pride
He her husband, she his bride
He in bright silk, her all in velvet
A yin-yang marriage as they tell it
Two lovers who meet but twice a day
When he must go, she need stay
Now I ask you, who are they?
HintOne more thing you should know
She tucks us in, he bathes us in glow.
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Answer
Day and night.
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Comments
GebbieRose   
Jul 12, 2006
| Cleverly & poetically written! VG job!  |
boodler   
Jul 12, 2006
| I was going to say that!  |
syracuse945   
Jul 12, 2006
| i gest the sun n the moon... close enuf, ryt?
good job! ur poem was very nicely dun!
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monkeygrl99   
Jul 12, 2006
| Same with syracuse945! |
WJSMama  
Jul 12, 2006
| Very fun. I also thought maybe the sun and moon |
jollylolly
Jul 12, 2006
| i thought that it was the sun and moon! but it was a good riddle!!  |
Sunrose   
Jul 12, 2006
| Very beautiful!  |
MansyP   
Jul 14, 2006
| i really liked that good poetec lines it flowed really well! Well done  |
shadow-x   
Jul 14, 2006
| yeah i guesed sun and moon to lol but then when i saw hint i guessed day and night |
tintiniscool   
Jul 15, 2006
| That was very well written |
josty   
Aug 22, 2006
| i got it right away, but i liked the poetic set up |
IMCUL4E   
Sep 08, 2006
| mooon and sun work, too, right? |
penguinboy  
Sep 22, 2006
| moon and sun doesnt work cause is the moon black? do the sun and moon meet twice a day? no it has to be day and night |
lmurray   
Sep 22, 2006
| AN OLDIE, (very old), BUT GOODIE  |
Rach_ 
Sep 22, 2006
| Nicely written, I enjoy only I guess quickly! |
OldChinaHand  
Sep 22, 2006
| Day and Night,
Night and day, this was the one
Only this beneath the moon or under the sun
It's no matter teaser where you are
I think of you
Day and night, night and day...good one.  |
marschie   
Sep 22, 2006
| I also thought SUN and MOON.
For 'penguinboy,' using poetic license, the MOON is black once a month, at NEW MOON, and the SUN and MOON meet twice a day because their LOCALES meet, once at dawn and again at dusk.
Lovely poem, lovely riddle. |
RRAMMOHAN   
Sep 22, 2006
| Very well written verse, so poetic! The teaser was pretty easy, though. Like some others, at first I thought it was the sun and the moon, but later corrected myself. A very satisfying teaser. Thanks.  |
bradon182001   
Sep 22, 2006
| Nice. I thought sun and moon immediately. Didn't look at the hint. The correct answer is better I think. Great job.  |
Terilynne88   
Sep 22, 2006
| Excellent job on your teaser. For those of you that are arguing for sun/moon...I thought of that answer too, but it is disqualified by the line "her with a mole and tiny bright freckles..." That makes it obvious that it is the night sky and not just the moon. Great job!!!  |
Scitchr   
Sep 22, 2006
| Written very well.  |
Littlegal  
Sep 22, 2006
| Very well written. I enjoyed this teaser.  |
Trishgal   
Sep 22, 2006
| Since i thought sun/moon I hate to say it ,but the answer failed with the mole and freckles line. But it sure was a good teaser.  |
Pizzazz2u   
Sep 22, 2006
| A very unique and poetic teaser. You put some thought into this one and it will get many to use their heads! The moon will not work because it will appear during the day time and/or sunlight hours, too! I enjoy the twist! Keep them coming. |
phyllisa   
Sep 22, 2006
| loved it, thought moon and sun |
scallio   
Sep 22, 2006
| I too answered SUN and MOON and I believe it works as well. Here's why:
Regarding the dark: the sun has no power of light on it's own. When it appears illuminated at night, it is the reflection of the sun we're seeing. You could say the moon is dark.
Regarding the mole and freckles: the moon appears to have moles and freckles on it when viewed through a telescope-- it's pock marked. The moon's craters look like freckles!
I thought this teaser was very beautifully written. Our morning teaser wrapped up in a piece of fine poetry. I truly enjoyed this.
And to the jerk using profanity in the comment section-- you're not going to be around long so SEE YA.  |
scallio   
Sep 22, 2006
| OOPS! I meant the moon has no power of light on it's own. Of course the sun does!
Should have said- "Regarding the dark: the MOON has no power of light on it's own." |
carouselsb3  
Sep 22, 2006
| I loved the poetry - I said dusk and dawn though which sounds much more poetic than "day and night" - Thanks! |
choptlivva   
Sep 22, 2006
| Beautiful deepsea!!! I loved it!!  |
jabdr   
Sep 22, 2006
| What a nice teaser to lead us into the weekend. Thanks
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Wingsfan  
Sep 22, 2006
| I got it right away! I like this one! Keep 'em coming!  |
ItsJustWildman   
Sep 22, 2006
| Very Good!!! I don't believe we should ever have to strain our brains too much on a Friday....  |
tdbrsun 
Sep 22, 2006
| Loved this riddle, even though I did not figure it out . It was written down in poem so very well. |
coachpisco 
Sep 22, 2006
| Very nice. Thanks. |
FeaerFactorY666   
Sep 23, 2006
| nice! |
luvdoritos706   
Sep 23, 2006
| nice.....good one |
Qrystal   
Sep 25, 2006
| Yayyyy I got a riddle! I got a riddle!! Yippeeee!!! That must mean it's a good one. Or maybe it's just because I'm an amateur astronomer and am often thinking of the night sky and celestial bodies as physical poetry...
Anyways, I was also thinking sun & moon at first, but a few more read-throughs and I decided to go with night & day because it seemed to "fit" better. Yippee, I say again! |
vlerma   
Sep 26, 2006
| You did a great job with the poetry and the little freckles, so neat. Nice job. I enjoyed it very much.  |
jr_whiz  
Sep 30, 2006
| I love poetry and teasers, so this is one of my favorites! Good Job!  |
sarita01 
Oct 17, 2006
| i got the sun and the moon but thats close enough yay me |
kittygirl19   
Aug 27, 2009
| [snoring]  |
mousechicks  
Sep 22, 2009
| This one was very easy for me. It was beautifully written and a nice nod to Shakespeare.  |
leroyleroy 
Sep 22, 2009
| WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM!! I LOVED IT. THERE IS ONLY ONE THING WRONG WITH IT.. I DIDNT THINK OF IT FIRST!!  |
leroyleroy 
Sep 22, 2009
| DEEPSEA YOU ARE TRULY A POET!!! |
elentir   
Sep 22, 2009
| The moon and sun are an invalid answer because the moon can be visible at any time of the day, making the meeting with the sun twice a day very inaccurate. Not to mention, how would the moon hide us?  |
doehead   
Sep 22, 2009
| Great poem. This was written by a famous poet in a magazine I read a couple of years ago . I don't remember who it was.  |
patiencewithaP   
Sep 22, 2009
| Good one! |
auntiesis    
Sep 22, 2009
| Very well written. I loved it. I got it very quickly, but it was really a great teaser.  |
crocodile   
Sep 22, 2009
| I got it at the part of meeting twice a day. Great Job!  |
avonma   
Sep 22, 2009
| So good! I thought of it before I got through the riddle. I thought of the sun and the moon at first, but realized the clues worked better for day and night.
Very nice! Thanks!  |
deepsea   
Sep 25, 2009
| Doehead you must be mistaken. I wrote this myself. |
Babe 
Sep 22, 2012
| Oh my gosh! I can't believe that I got this one even without the hint. As one poet to another, your poem is lovely! Thanks for posting.  |
Maggiethe8th   
Sep 22, 2012
| really nice read this morning-even nicer to get it! thanks!  |
cutebug   
Sep 22, 2012
| Easy one
I don't know who deepsea is,but this was written by someone else. The last line was changed by deepsea. It originally read( for I am night,and he is day). I know it was written in the 18hds by a poet named Homer something. |
tripleteam5 
Sep 22, 2012
| nice work on poem BUT a HINT??? seriously |
iggy39   
Sep 22, 2012
| nice one I got it right away. Thought it was good one but very easy.  |
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