The Intruder
Mystery teasers are little stories where you need to figure out what happened based on the given clues.Emily was sitting at her study table, home alone, on a cold and stormy night. Her parents had taken a flight earlier in the morning to Australia as her grandmother had passed away. She had wanted to follow her parents but she had an important English examination the next day which she could not miss.
The storm was getting heavier by the minute and the wind was howling outside. All this noise made it very hard for her to concentrate. She was on the verge of dozing off when she was shaken alert by a sudden "THUD!" She dismissed it as a window which had been slammed shut by the wind.
She tried to concentrate on her books when she heard faint footsteps. Emily got out of her room and looked around when suddenly, without warning, she was grabbed by the neck. She tried to scream but it came out as a mere whimper as the intruder was pressing hard against her throat with his arm. She tried to free herself from his grip but to no avail.
"Give me all your money!" growled the man who had grabbed her from behind.
"Th-there is none h-here! Please ll-let me go!" cried Emily.
"Don't LIE TO ME!" screamed the increasingly agitated man. She felt the man strengthen his grip around her neck. She said nothing and a few seconds passed by in silence. Suddenly the phone rang which alerted both of them.
"People will get suspicious if I don't answer the phone," said Emily, with a controlled voice. The intruder let her go.
"Alright, but NO funny business, or ELSE!" said the nervous intruder. Emily walked toward the phone. She took a deep breath and calmed herself. She picked up the phone.
"Hey Em! How's the revision going?" said the caller.
"Hey Anna. Thanks for the call. Hey you know those Science notes I lent you last week? Well I really need them back. It would be a great help to me. It's an emergency, so if you could give me them tomorrow it would be great. Please hurry in finding the notes. I need to get back to my books now. Bye," Emily said. She hung up the phone.
"It was wise of you not to say anything," said the intruder, although he was more than a bit confused by her conversation.
"Now TELL ME WHERE THE MONEY IS KEPT!" screamed the thief.
"It...it's...in my dad's room. The first room on the right. Third drawer," said Emily.
"SHOW me!" said the man, and removed his grip around her neck. She took a big gulp of air and nearly fell. She swallowed hard and said a silent prayer. She walked slowly, in silence, toward her father's room. All of a sudden, they heard police sirens. The intruder froze in his footsteps. He ran to the nearest window and jumped out of it.
Emily ran outside in time to see the intruder being escorted into the car. She saw Anna and she ran toward her and hugged her.
"Smart kids," said the policeman.
What had happened?
The storm was getting heavier by the minute and the wind was howling outside. All this noise made it very hard for her to concentrate. She was on the verge of dozing off when she was shaken alert by a sudden "THUD!" She dismissed it as a window which had been slammed shut by the wind.
She tried to concentrate on her books when she heard faint footsteps. Emily got out of her room and looked around when suddenly, without warning, she was grabbed by the neck. She tried to scream but it came out as a mere whimper as the intruder was pressing hard against her throat with his arm. She tried to free herself from his grip but to no avail.
"Give me all your money!" growled the man who had grabbed her from behind.
"Th-there is none h-here! Please ll-let me go!" cried Emily.
"Don't LIE TO ME!" screamed the increasingly agitated man. She felt the man strengthen his grip around her neck. She said nothing and a few seconds passed by in silence. Suddenly the phone rang which alerted both of them.
"People will get suspicious if I don't answer the phone," said Emily, with a controlled voice. The intruder let her go.
"Alright, but NO funny business, or ELSE!" said the nervous intruder. Emily walked toward the phone. She took a deep breath and calmed herself. She picked up the phone.
"Hey Em! How's the revision going?" said the caller.
"Hey Anna. Thanks for the call. Hey you know those Science notes I lent you last week? Well I really need them back. It would be a great help to me. It's an emergency, so if you could give me them tomorrow it would be great. Please hurry in finding the notes. I need to get back to my books now. Bye," Emily said. She hung up the phone.
"It was wise of you not to say anything," said the intruder, although he was more than a bit confused by her conversation.
"Now TELL ME WHERE THE MONEY IS KEPT!" screamed the thief.
"It...it's...in my dad's room. The first room on the right. Third drawer," said Emily.
"SHOW me!" said the man, and removed his grip around her neck. She took a big gulp of air and nearly fell. She swallowed hard and said a silent prayer. She walked slowly, in silence, toward her father's room. All of a sudden, they heard police sirens. The intruder froze in his footsteps. He ran to the nearest window and jumped out of it.
Emily ran outside in time to see the intruder being escorted into the car. She saw Anna and she ran toward her and hugged her.
"Smart kids," said the policeman.
What had happened?
Comments
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Posted by oxana007 on Jan 06, 2009 easy but good |
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Posted by Psychic_Master on Jan 06, 2009 Thanks. It's my first attempt in this category and I made it up myself. |
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Posted by markmonnin on Jan 07, 2009 Fun story and good answer. |
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Posted by Psychic_Master on Jan 07, 2009 Yeah I thought of that possibility too. It could have worked as well, I guess. |
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Posted by luckythirteen on Jan 09, 2009 Very interesting teaser. Of course, if that had been me, I wouldn't have even thought about that! It was fun! |
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Posted by al111 on Jan 10, 2009 great teaser |
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Posted by Shadows on Jan 11, 2009 Awesome! I didn't even come close to getting it. Good job! |
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Posted by melzerh on Jan 11, 2009 She is wise |
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Posted by dowinka on Jan 15, 2009 very good! I thought it might've had something to do with her saying emergency in the call. |
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Posted by yangjun on Jan 29, 2009 This is very easy |
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Posted by rt1819 on Feb 15, 2009 I thought that she may have used a different inflection of her voice-like thanks for the CALL, the notes would be a great HELP...something like that. But I liked your answer too. Our stupid phone hangs up if you press mute. I have hung up on many of my friends doing that! |
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Posted by Ladyluck129 on Feb 18, 2009 Great answer! I never would have thought of it. I thought that, since she was doing an ENGLISH paper, maybe the "science" note "emergency" was a code word, or something like that. Great teaser! |
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Posted by perrygf on Feb 18, 2009 Great puzzle, but I dismissed that answer as too obvious, because Agatha Christie used it in one of her stories. |
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Posted by precious1026 on Feb 28, 2009 |
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Posted by EienNiKirei on Mar 14, 2009 smart!!! thats a good thing to teach kids to do! Excellent Teaser. |
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Posted by JrWriter on Mar 21, 2009 Loved this; neat trick. Kicked myself when I didn't get it. Super funny. |
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Posted by Dustomatic on Apr 14, 2009 I really liked this one. Furthermore, it was excellently written. Kudos. |
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Posted by Psychic_Master on Apr 14, 2009 Thanks for all the positive feedback guys. |
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Posted by mcFuzzy on Apr 29, 2009 That was a great teaser! I had a felling that it was something to do with the word "emergency," but I had NO idea that she had hit the mute button |
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Posted by Daniyal on Apr 30, 2009 A really difficult teaser! i knew it had something to do with the word "emergency". |
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Posted by brain23 on Jun 10, 2009 I figured something was up when Emily said "emergency." But why would Emily have been so nervous if she had a plan? |
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Posted by playagurl on Jun 17, 2009 Without looking at your answer, this is my guess................She has an English Examination and when the caller called, she asked that person for science notes and said its an emergency......So mayb thts how the caller came to know sumthin was wrong and sent the police i guess.............is it right???????? i havent seen the answer yet..........i swear ta god |
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Posted by shabz4lyf on Jul 15, 2009 wow nice one!! |
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Posted by mathisnice on Jul 20, 2009 I thought that they had a special code. |
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Posted by akai1412 on Aug 05, 2009 how fast is she talking? Can she press the mute button that fast without making any interruption in her pace or moving her hand? that's awesome skill to have |
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Posted by scallio on Jan 06, 2010 Good one! I didn't really get it other than it seemed to me that the friends probably didn't have science together and the word "emergency" would alert the friend, but I sure enjoyed the read. |
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Posted by Marple on Apr 11, 2010 Brilliant - I didn't get it! i thought maybe she said 'science' knowing that she was supposed to be doing english. Great stuff |
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Posted by WiseWolf on May 28, 2010 Aw, darn! That was really smart of her! I was on the right track, but gave up. I knew it was something like that. |
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Posted by cutieluck on Jun 03, 2010 that was nice i liked it at first i was confused but when i read the hint, i kind of thought about the phone and about maybe the mute button |
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Posted by Island_girl808 on Jun 22, 2010 WOW . I lvoe these kine stoories |
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Posted by Marple on Jun 27, 2010 WOW! That was really hard - great stuff! |
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Posted by suchageek on Jul 31, 2010 I thought it was the fact that she was studying for an English exam & mentioned Science in the conversation. Plus her exam was tomorrow. So, why would she need the notes tomorrow? But, that's a good tip. |
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Posted by JQPublic on Sep 12, 2010 Wicked! Like, I thought it's something to do with science notes and banknotes. |
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Posted by wickywoo on Nov 29, 2010 really clever |
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Posted by Radd_stuff on Nov 30, 2010 This is such a good teaser!!! |
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Posted by thebrain789 on Dec 28, 2010 I love it! I wish I was that smart |
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Posted by jordy56 on Dec 31, 2010 Great Teaser! I got it even though I thought I was wrong. Good Job!!! |
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Posted by awsomethy on Apr 08, 2011 WONDERFUL! That can actually come in handy in you ever find yourself in a situation like that. |
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Posted by bubbubfilt on Jun 15, 2011 I thought. . . ENGLISH exam. SCIENCE notes. Good teaser. |
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Posted by Bajanator on Aug 11, 2011 bubbubfilt, I got the same as you, ahaha. Still works, but good job on the teaser! |
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Posted by KillerQueen on Aug 12, 2012 I thought it was because she asked for the notes the next day, but the test would be the next day. Awesome! |
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Posted by BrainyGarrett on Aug 13, 2012 This is pretty clever i thought it had to do with the fact that she was talking about science notes when seh had a english exam and because the exam was the next day and she wanted them the next day. Also I thought that saying "emergency" had something to do with it. It's a really good brainteaser though and your answer does make sense although it would take a lot of skill to make that sound just right. |
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